This is my first cartoon called Stickyman superhero for hire. It's about a superhero who starts his own business to save the world. It's about his first day. the next episode will have more details on his arch enemy and how he came to be.
I put it on myspace cause it's 24 minutes long and most sites are limited to 10-20 minute video feeds.
I truly hope you get a laugh out of it. If you like it please let me know what you thought about it. Im not getting paid for it, although the music request and stuff cost me a pretty penny I'd like some feedback on my work and if you could tell a friend or two that would be nice to.
Thanks a lot
www.myspace.com/flyingvanhammy
it's on the left side of my page. The dude with the afro sleeping.
That was cool. Original and funny, loved the style. Keep it up!
So I just watched your stickyman pilot... It makes no sense. It's also so unforgivingly sporadic and random that it's hard to follow from scene to scene. There is absolutely no structure to the writing and the animation is so... spotty. It just felt the whole way through that you just weren't trying. It just doesn't look or feel at any way at all professional. It's a mess.
It's also not funny, at all. I didn't even get a single chuckle out of it. and there's only so many times you can use the pam joke in one episode.
Also this so called daughter of major payne? What's her deal? and if she's the daughter of Major Payne why is she not black? Again, it makes no sense.
and the superman bit was just... lame.
Better luck next time.