Hi,
i did a little sequence yesterday, wich i'll be using as the rough to build a more finished one. i'll be very gratefull of any advice and comment to polish it before getting into the next step.
Thanks in advance
Sir Patroclo
Little action sequence, looking for comments for improvement
By Sir Patroclo | Monday, May 29, 2006 at 10:13pm
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Little action sequence, looking for comments for improvement
Overall it looks very nice.
Though personally I think it could use a bit more contrast, make the sword hits a bit snappier vs smooth jumping motion, and exaggerate anticipations, especially before the first jump.
Maybe also either squash him a bit more when he lands, or bend his legs a little, just for a few frames before standing still. That will give him some weight, but he wont look any less agile.
Patrick
http://www.patrickdesilets.com
It could be faster, have a bit more snap.
If you're running at a steady framerate (looks like 15fps), try setting it to 30fps (proper TV framerate) and then setting certain frames (specifically the swipe frames where there's a lot of distortion of form) to ones, with the rest on twos.
Inkthinker.DeviantArt
Humouring The Fates, Inc.
Hi,
thanks a lot for the advice. Adjusted the fps to 30 and worked on delaying some parts, and on the squash thing, here's a quick approach:
it seems to run slower than it should on the browser...
Salut!