I have just recently finished my newest flick entitled "The Getaway" it takes only about 1 minute to load......... so please view my video at this website
www.geocities.com/gabemarchionda/thegetaway.gif
PS: DONT CLICK ON THE LINK ABOVE.... TYPE THE WEB ADDRESS INTO YOUR BROWSER
PLEASE EMAIL YOUR THOUGHTS TO: gabrielmarchionda@hotmail.com
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My newgrounds movie--->http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/247657
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/251906
Hi Gabe,
Wow, you just keep cranking these shorts out! You are prolific, I'll give you that. This short was more character driven which is a nice progression over your fist posting.
When the two characters fall off the cliff, I would speed it up more when they hit the ground. You just need the top of the head showing at the top of the frame, then on the next frame, have him just above the ground, and stretch out his body, and on the next frame, have the bodies as a crumpled mess on the street. This will give the hit more impact.
Also I would cut back to the store owner durring the chase. This will add a bit more drama to the story.
I like the story. Makes no sence, and reminds me of my first cartoons that I drew in the margins of all my grade school text books.
Gabe, from now on, can you please post any new art or animation ONLY in here, in the "Show and Tell" forums. You are spaming all the other forums with your repeat posts. This will get you banned by the moderators.
Good luck on your next short Gabe.
...we must all face a choice, between what is right... and what is easy."
(see subject title)
Adam
Atomcloud Animation
type the web adress into your browser u cant click on the link
www.geocities.com/gabemarchionda/thegetaway.gif
My newgrounds movie--->http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/247657
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/251906
Good job Gabe... Aka saw it a million times before you posted it on this forum.
:rolleyes:
I typed the address in my browser. Same result.
All I see is a LOADING TAKES ABOUT 1 MINUTE...
It loads the data. I can see that at the base of my browser. But nothing plays. What is-I-a doin wrong?
madaman90
Adam
Atomcloud Animation
okk i lied it takeslike 2 minutes............................................ just be patient even if ure browseer is fully loaded
My newgrounds movie--->http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/247657
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/251906
I totally believe that this little film is here.
It's strike 3 for me pal. This film simply doesn't work on my MAC using IE:(
I like writing to animators about their stuff. But my crit for this one is that you take notice when someone like me has a problem seeing the film at all. Spell the problem out so that everyone can see it.
In my last film Father
A couple of people said the sound was horrible on their PC. This is something that I have to fix because it seems to work fine on all of the computers I've seen the film run on.
So,
Keep up the good work...as I'm sure you do even though I can't see what you've done. Is there anything else of yours that I could see with a link to it?
L8r,
Adam
Atomcloud Animation