Critique for My Animation

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Critique for My Animation

Hey guys, i would really appreciate if you could review my initial scene for my animation series. Any advice, suggestion, criticism are welcomed. Here is the link to my movie.

https://youtu.be/LLpGaqHz8xk

This is a story of two dumpling friends escaping from boiling steamer and about to begin their adventure.

Location: Kathmandu, Nepal