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Reality is stranger than Fantasy

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Hey all. It's been a while since I posted anything, but I have been working hard on various art works and I wouldn't mind some feed back, so I figured you guys would be able to give me some advice.

Here is a character height chart for a story that I am working on called Gears

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Submitted by Katana on

I like the direction of your characters. The logo needs to pop a bit more to read right. The values of the letters and the borders are to close together. The girl has a nice body, but her chest looks a bit displaced and perhaps slightly to small. You've drawn your large character in a wedge shape. To make him more of an impact I would say increase the size of the boots, most notably where the toes are...I think you'll get what you are after. Nice job and keep posting.