Ok, I am dial up so this is taking a second. :D
I like the candy thing. So what kind of feed back are you looking for?
You have a very nice variety of characters. For me the story ran a little slow, but like I said, I am dial up. On a bigger machine with a faster connection the whole thing might run faster, but I am guessing about that.
You have the candy showing up only at the news desk, how about finding a way to put it into all of the scenes.
I love the character designs Skinny. I agree with Wontobe that there should be more product placement. But then again you said the script came from the client, so the product placement is up to them. I think the animation works well with the simple character designs.
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My internet connection is pretty fast, but it still took me a while to download the episodes. I also like the character designs and the art direction, but I would have liked the candy pouches to bounce as they hit table since they pop out so much. I also thought the reporter's dramatic action at the end of episode 2 was pretty funny, and the guy with the drum just makes me want to laugh.
awesome feedback. the thing is the client is a huge MNC so we had to be careful with some of the things we did. and we didnt want to take too many risks or be too distracting.
also this was a RUSH job.
i know its in Hindi, so ill give you a gist.
Radha is this cow who has won the crown of Miss Palampur (the city where its based) and she goes missing. Everyone is looking for her and they have taken a lot of topical issues and made some funny puns based on them.
Ultimately in episode three she is found acting in Bollywood. its just all very silly but it was awesome fun to work on.
That's pretty good work for a rush job. Thanks for explaining the story. I figured that it was about a missing beauty queen, but I wasn't expecting a cow!
oh come on.
click and give me some feedback for cryin out loud.
dont make me beg.
Ok, I am dial up so this is taking a second. :D
I like the candy thing. So what kind of feed back are you looking for?
You have a very nice variety of characters. For me the story ran a little slow, but like I said, I am dial up. On a bigger machine with a faster connection the whole thing might run faster, but I am guessing about that.
You have the candy showing up only at the news desk, how about finding a way to put it into all of the scenes.
thanks wontobe.
the script came from the client (the agency) so we didnt interfere too much with tht stuff. we only made inputs in episode 2.
I love the character designs Skinny. I agree with Wontobe that there should be more product placement. But then again you said the script came from the client, so the product placement is up to them. I think the animation works well with the simple character designs.
Aloha,
the Ape
...we must all face a choice, between what is right... and what is easy."
My internet connection is pretty fast, but it still took me a while to download the episodes. I also like the character designs and the art direction, but I would have liked the candy pouches to bounce as they hit table since they pop out so much. I also thought the reporter's dramatic action at the end of episode 2 was pretty funny, and the guy with the drum just makes me want to laugh.
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awesome feedback. the thing is the client is a huge MNC so we had to be careful with some of the things we did. and we didnt want to take too many risks or be too distracting.
also this was a RUSH job.
i know its in Hindi, so ill give you a gist.
Radha is this cow who has won the crown of Miss Palampur (the city where its based) and she goes missing. Everyone is looking for her and they have taken a lot of topical issues and made some funny puns based on them.
Ultimately in episode three she is found acting in Bollywood. its just all very silly but it was awesome fun to work on.
That's pretty good work for a rush job. Thanks for explaining the story. I figured that it was about a missing beauty queen, but I wasn't expecting a cow!
Sharvonique Studios
www.sharvonique.com
Animated By Sharvonique Blog
http://sharvonique.animationblogspot.com
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yeah. we finished the whole thing epi 1,2, and 3 (whicll be up later) in 16 days . all said and done. with all animation, fx and lip sync.
the webisodes take the story further from a national ad campaign which actually shows the cow....