Working on my first demo reel. I would like feedback

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Working on my first demo reel. I would like feedback

https://vimeo.com/208076364

I would like a smuch feedback as possible. I am still working on it

Some of it is better than

Some of it is better than other parts, I will watch for final version.

 

 

What are the better and worst parts?