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well amongst the 20 some odd practice designs i did this week this one really struck me.

its a grunged style alot of cleaning to run through but i like the look of it.

i wasnt sure about how its going to run fully but flash will be used for sure in the header and the nav as an absolute.

character is rather old so i might make a new one soon

hey, thats some nice work you got! Update the character a bit and i think you might have something here. Also you said you had 20 designs..Well post them up so we can see!

Your strength is definitely in the design elements.

If I can add one little piece of commentary....generally the thin/bold font contrast bit you did up top, is a two-word setup..........like testingonetwothree ...If you have three it's generally preferable to string it all together.........so rather than

I AM ALLSTAR

go for

IAMALLSTAR

With such a strong phrase (sentence, actually) there will be no confusion in reading the first two words separately even though they're joined (ie no one going "ee-um?") and it'd look a lot more slick and professional....

thanks alot guys i plan to update it in a couple days ive got some other thing school related to atend to first.

well after school i sat down with some free time (snack time :D )

and here is what ive added to it basicly i took away everything and redid it :P
but a good bit stayed the same the idea was continued

Much coolness. Looks a lot cleaner and more refined. Nothing against your character drawing's stylings, but it could be absolutely perfect and still ruin a design because everything around him is some other "look." I like what you have going here. Everything seems related, unified.

like i stated befor its something that was grabbed from the bin it was really a placeholder till i got the new ones done

i know this is a double post but here we go

**Known Problems**
-in IE the thing thinks its active x, any one know how to remove this?
-Fire Fox Has unsynced audio and the speed on content loading is about 3 times slower than it sould be. Any ideas?

here it is http://www.allstarr.net/wip/main.html

also the site runs at 30 fps